考點五  考查語句間連接成分的使用能力

要想寫好一篇文章，僅僅具備基本的遣詞造句的能力還是不夠的，因為即使一篇文章中的所有句子都是正確的，但若各句之間沒有必要的連接成分，那只能算是一篇沒有錯誤的文章，絕不能算是一篇好文章。請看一篇實例：

假定你是李華，David 是你的美國筆友。他對中國鼓勵使用環保購物袋很感興趣，來信向你詢問此事。請你給他寫封回信。主要內容如下：感謝他的關注；簡要介紹相關情況；談談你的感想。

請看下面這篇文章（缺乏必要的連接成分）：

Dear David,

I’m glad that you’ve noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection. Thank you for your concern.

Too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution. Our government encourages us to use environment-friendly shopping bags. These bags are made of a variety of material. They can be easily treated when they become rubbish. They can be reused. More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them.

I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the many steps we are to make our country an even cleaner place.

Yours,

Li Hua

然后，再請看看下面這篇（加上連接成分）：

Dear David,

I’m glad that you’ve noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection. Thank you for your concern.

As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our government encourages us to use environment-friendly shopping bags. These bags are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. Besides, they can be reused. More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them.

I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the many steps we are to make our country an even cleaner place.

Yours,

Li Hua

考點六  考查使用高級詞匯和復雜結構的能力

前面我們已經提到，近年來的高考英語書面表達的評分標準有了很大變化，由原來只要求考生寫對，轉而要求考生寫好，同時鼓勵考生嘗試使用一些高級詞匯和復雜句型，并對由此所產生的錯誤采取了寬容態度。如書面表達評分標準的第五檔（最好一檔）的要求是：“……應用了較多語法結構和詞匯；語法結構和詞匯有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用復雜結構和高級詞匯所致。”

從最近幾年的書面表達評分實踐來看，使用高級詞匯和復雜結構的能力在書面表達評分越來越得到評卷老師的重視，它往往是一篇文章能否得高分或滿分的重要方面。請看一篇實例：

假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢如何才能學好中文。請你根據下列要點寫封回信：參加中文學習班；看中文書刊、電視；學唱中文歌曲；交中國朋友。

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