Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. I think it is important to take a Chinese course. You can learn from the teacher and practice with your classmates. It’s also helpful to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese. You can also learn and sing Chinese songs to help remember Chinese words and make Chinese friends to practise your spoken Chinese.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

請看下面經過修改的文章：

Dear Peter,

I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.

Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Try and write me in Chinese next time.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

該文章中可視為高級結構之處有很多，如：

1. first…then…besides…等表示順序的詞匯的使用，使得文章意思更連貫，層次更清楚。

2. as you’ll be able to learn from…這一原因狀語從句的使用，表現出較好語言運用能力。

3. It should be a good idea to…這一結構的使用也是充分表現了作者的語言駕馭能力。

4. because by doing so you’ll learn and…是很高明的一個表達，不僅運用了原因狀語從句，而且還在其中插入了by doing so這樣的方式狀語。

5. Try and write me in Chinese next time這一結尾也很有特色，不僅表達地道，而且，很是到位。

6. 其中的fellow students, help to do sth, whenever possible等也都是讓老師眼睛一亮的不錯表達。

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