9. Both English and Chinese may share the same standards but each pays different attention in different perspective. (p. 118)

【問題分析】本句存在介詞搭配不當，in應(yīng)改為to。另外，different 后面的perspective是可數(shù)名詞，應(yīng)使用復數(shù)形式perspectives。

10. We concentrate our research to study fundamental problems for as you know, in our country, we still have some nutritional diseases, such as X, Y, Z. (p. 130)

【問題分析】英語動詞concentrate沒有接動詞不定式的用法，而且research與study意思重復。另外，還存在標點符號使用不當問題。建議全句改為：We concentrate our research on the fundamental problems, for, as you know, in our country, we still have some nutritional diseases, such as X, Y, Z. 有關(guān)Concentrate的用法問題，類似的例子還有：However, a translator can concentrate his efforts to reproduce it according to its major purpose. (p. 286)

11. The English-speaking people regard the following sentence is poor. (p. 141)

【問題分析】英語動詞regard不接從句，后與介詞as搭配，應(yīng)將is改為as。

12. Journals and diaries often give personal impressions and fresh insight into experience. (p. 202)

【問題分析】這句話存在介詞搭配問題。介詞into只與insight搭配，不能與impressions搭配。在英語中，表示對某物的印象，一般與介詞of搭配。另外，無論從平行結(jié)構(gòu)還是insight的可數(shù)名詞特點考慮，都應(yīng)使用復數(shù)形式insights。建議全句改為：Journals and diaries often give personal impressions of and fresh insights into experience.

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