10. Impressionist writers tend to render details as they appear immediately to the senses. (p. 273)

【問題分析】如果沒有理解錯的話，appear應改為appeal。

10. Contrasted with dramatic structure is episodic structure, in which one scene is tied to another only loosely, usually because what happens, happens to the main the character or to the main personage. (p. 281)

【問題分析】happens, happens應去掉前一個happens；the character應去掉定冠詞the。此外，because what happens, happens to the main the character or to the main personage在結構和語義上似乎都不完整。

11. Although there are many essential elements in drama, the actor’s lines play an very important part in characterizing each character. (p. 287)

【問題分析】an very important part 中的 an 應改為 a。

結  語

除了上述問題之外，該書還存在比較多的標點符號使用不當問題，而且冠詞隨意使用現象非常普遍：該用冠詞的地方沒有用，不該用的卻用了；該用定冠詞的地方用了不定冠詞，該用不定冠詞的地方卻又用了定冠詞。還有不少句子，盡管沒有明顯的語法、詞法問題，但讀起來給人不順暢的感覺，仍需要進一步改進。 

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